So far I haven’t received any feedback on my essay three. I would like to that way I could get others opinions on how well I did on my essay. I did get a little help from one of my classmates. She helped me write a thesis statement, which helped me with my topic sentences. After that I found it fairly easy to write the rest of my essay. All of my thoughts were able to flow together. When I do look over my draft I want to make sure that I use good transition words for the beginning of my paragraphs as I talk about a new subject. I will probably do this for the next two days to make sure that everything flows together and to make sure I didn’t get off topic. By Monday I will have my final draft, and get some of my peers to read it since I haven’t got any feedback from my group.